Really cool rendering, Kevin. The body copy relates to the old style type style well. The graphic and the word wrap around it are masterfully done. My only concern is the title. I like how it flows into the right page, but it is currently overpowering your graphic. Whic do you prefer to be the focal point? The graphics has nice subtle line weights, while the title is bold and loud. Perhaps the problem lies in the proximity between the two. The graphic is open on all sides, but gets invaded by the title. Some creative spacing could make this a perfect piece.
Really cool rendering, Kevin. The body copy relates to the old style type style well. The graphic and the word wrap around it are masterfully done. My only concern is the title. I like how it flows into the right page, but it is currently overpowering your graphic. Whic do you prefer to be the focal point? The graphics has nice subtle line weights, while the title is bold and loud. Perhaps the problem lies in the proximity between the two. The graphic is open on all sides, but gets invaded by the title. Some creative spacing could make this a perfect piece.
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